aur ek rat guzar gai tere intzaar mein
fir hai palkein bheegi meri tere intzaar mein
kahi aisa na ho ae humdum mere
ke jee bhi na paye hum aur maut bhi na aae tere intzaar mein...
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Pranjal Sharma
About Me
- pranjal
- JAIPUR, Rajasthan, India
- hi everyone...i started writing shayari during my medical college days. It started as time pass but slowly turned into a passion...its a "treasure" that i cherish :) please feel free to post your own compositions and comments. also I am starting a separate blog to express what I think and what I see people around me thinking about our magical country filled with amusements all around..everywhere. again, please feel free to add your valuable opinions. Pranjal
my vocab is too short 2 praise it.just beautiful.m daring to say sumthing cnt even think of matching u..hum toh palkaen bhi bhigo na sakae ki kahin tu rusva na ho jayae.ki in ashkon mae tera aks na dekh lae koi.haan yeh dil roya zaar zaar taerae intzar mae....
ReplyDeletelata...is it u? mast likha hai...
ReplyDeletethanks 4 d compliment...but abhi itna bhi acha nahi hu...i need to improve a lot...n i m striving 4 it...
this one is nice...quite describes how i feel when SM isnt here...wish i would also start writing again...no match to u...but i wrote a bit of english poetry when i used to have the time...maybe il feel inspired n start afresh..
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hey...thanks Kanuji...i m sure u would do far better then u think u can...i m not that gud yar...just learning...take out time 4 urself...n do what u feel like...u will feel gud once u do it... :)
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